Тупое начало. ГГ - бывший вор,погибший на воровском деле в сфере кражи информации с компьютеров без подготовки, то есть по своей лени и глупости. Ну разумеется винит в гибели не себя, а наводчика. ГГ много воображающий о себе и считающий себя наёмником с жестким характером, но поступающий точно так же как прежний хозяин тела в которое он попал. Старого хозяина тела ГГ считает трусом и пьяницей, никчемным человеком,себя же бывалым
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человеком, способным выжить в любой ситуации. Первая и последняя мысля ГГ - нужно бежать из родительского дома тела, затаится и собрать данные для дальнейших планов. Умней не передумал как бежать из дома без наличия прямых угроз телу. Будет под забором собирать сведения, кто он теперь и как дальше жить. Аргумент побега - боязнь выдать себя чужого в теле их сына. Прямо умный и не трусливый поступок? Смешно. Бежав из дома, где его никто не стерёг, решил подумать. Не получилось. Так как захотелось нажраться. Нашёл незнамо куда в поисках, где бы выпить подальше от дома. По факту я не нашёл разницы между двумя видами одного тела. Попал почти в притон с кошельковом золота в кармане, где таким как он опасно находится. С ходу кинул золотой себе на выпивку и нашел себе приключений на дебильные поступки. Дальше читать не стал. ГГ - дебил и вор по найму, без царя в голове, с соответствующей речью и дешевыми пантами по жизни вместо мозгов. Не интересен и читать о таком неприятно. Да и не вписываются спецы в сфере воровства в сфере цифровой информации в данного дебилойда. Им же приходится просчитывать все возможные варианты проблем пошагова с нахождением решений. Иначе у предурков заказывают красть "железо" целиком, а не конкретные файлы. Я не встречал хороших программистов,любящих нажираться в стельку. У них мозг - основа работоспособности в любимом деле. Состояние тормозов и отключения мозга им не нравятся. Пьют чисто для удовольствия, а не с целью побыстрей отключить мозг, как у данного ГГ. В корзину, без сожаления.
Оценил серию на отлично. ГГ - школьник из выпускного класса, вместе с сотнями случайных людей во сне попадает в мир летающих островов. Остров позволяет летать в облаках, собирать ресурсы и развивать свою базу. Новый мир работает по своим правилам, у него есть свои секреты и за эти секреты приходится сражаться.
Плюсы
1. Интересный, динамический сюжет. Интересно описан сам мир и его правила, все довольно гармонично и естественно.
2. ГГ
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неплохо раскрыт как личность. У него своя история семьи - он живет с отцом отдельно, а его сестра - с матерью. Отношения сложные, скорее даже враждебрные. Сам ГГ действует довольно логично - иногда помогает людям, иногда действует в своих интересах(когда например награда одна и все хотят ее получить)
3. Это уся, но скорее уся на минималках. Тут нет километровых размышлений и философий на тему культиваций. Так по минимуму (терпимо)
4. Есть баланс силы между неспящими и соперничество.
Минсы
Можно придраться конечно к чему-нибудь, но бросающихся в глаза недостатков на удивление мало. Можно отметить рояли, но они есть у всех неспящих и потому не особо заметны. Ну еще отмечу странные отношения между отцом и сыном, матерью и сыном (оба игнорят сына).
В целом серия довольно удачна, впечатление положительное - можно почитать
Если судить по сей литературе, то фавелы Рио плачут от зависти к СССР вообще и Москве в частности. Если бы ГГ не был особо отмороженным десантником в прошлом, быть ему зарезану по три раза на дню...
Познания автора потрясают - "Зенит-Е" с выдержкой 1/25, низкочувствительная пленка Свема на 100 единиц...
Областная контрольная по физике, откуда отлично ее написавшие едут сразу на всесоюзную олимпиаду...
Вобщем, биографии автора нет, но
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непохоже, чтоб он СССР застал хотя бы в садиковском возрасте :) Ну, или уже все давно и прочно забыл.
‘Oh,’ said Crake, still staring out at the end of the Awakeners. ‘Nothing much.’
‘They’re retreating!’
Malvery paused in his labours just long enough to glance at the sky. Hard to tell what was what up there, amid all the fire and ruin. But the Sammies were getting shredded, he could tell that much. Smoking shells of aircraft crashed down on the city below. Caught between the Manes and the anti-aircraft guns, they’d suffered atrocious losses. Nothing more than they deserved, in Malvery’s opinion.
‘The Manes!’ said the soldier, seeing that Malvery didn’t understand. ‘Look! They’re pulling back!’ He laughed. ‘They don’t like the taste of our guns any more than the Sammies do!’
‘Don’t worry about what’s up there,’ said Malvery. ‘We’ve got work to do down here. Give me a hand, now.’
Between them, they lifting the groaning man from the road and put him on to a makeshift stretcher made of bloodied Awakener cassocks tied between two rifles. Malvery scanned the road for any last signs of movement, but saw none. This was the third casualty they’d rescued from the killing ground in front of the anti-aircraft emplacement. The rest were beyond saving.
His eyes roamed over the scattered dead, their bodies chewed up in the jaws of the gatling gun. Beyond lay the wrecked frigate and the smouldering trench it had cut in its wake. Further on, he could see the Archduke’s palace high on the crag, smashed aircraft raining down like meteors around it, fiery explosions blooming in distant streets. Thesk, his city, made apocalyptic. He’d never believed it possible, never thought he’d see the day. Such loss, such waste.
And yet, as he hauled up the stretcher and they carried their burden away, he felt pride along with his sorrow. Pride for the Cap’n, for Silo, for himself and all the crew of the Ketty Jay. And pride for Ashua, who’d stood with them till the end, and scared him silly doing it. If she’d been killed, he’d never have forgiven himself.
But she hadn’t. And the Awakeners were wiped out, and the Sammies were defeated. Now the Manes had turned tail, heading back through the vortex to their icy cities beyond the Wrack. Neither Sammies nor Manes had been able to land troops. Only the Awakeners had men in the city, and they’d put up no further resistance.
The battle was won. Whatever the cost, the battle was won. A fierce heat grew in his breast at the thought, a furnace glow from within.
They’d won. Vardia had won.
The anti-aircraft gun was still booming as they carried the wounded man through the gate and laid him down in the courtyard with the others. The sound of it was deafening, but against the roar of war it was only one more noise among many. As the gate shut behind them, Malvery saw Silo up on the wall, bellowing orders, organising the defence of the perimeter. He was taking no chances. No one was recapturing that gun after the price they’d paid to get it.
‘Anything I can do?’ Ashua asked as she limped over, an Awakener rifle as her crutch. She was pale, but lively enough, considering. The bullet had gone right through her thigh. There wasn’t much Malvery could do but disinfect it and bind it up. With the right drugs, she’d be fine.
‘Just keep your weight off that leg,’ said Malvery.
‘Aye aye, Doc.’
He turned his attention to the wounded man and began cutting away the uniform with a blade so he could assess the damage. Eventually, when Ashua showed no sign of moving, he harrumphed.
‘You were brave out there,’ he said awkwardly.
‘You too,’ she replied.
He hummed and hawed as he looked in his bag for a new spool of catgut to make stitches. ‘I oughta apologise,’ he said. ‘The way I treated you.’
‘S’okay,’ said Ashua. ‘Bloody stupid thing I did. Still. .’ She looked up at the sky. ‘At least I’m the one responsible for the annihilation of the Sammies’ entire air force, eh? In fact, if they hadn’t turned up, the Awakeners would probably have overrun this city by now.’ She took on a thoughtful tone. ‘You might even say I’m. . well, a hero.’
‘Don’t push it, girl,’ Malvery growled. He raised an eyebrow and glared at her. ‘However it turned out, you were still-’ Then he saw the expression on her face, and realised she was joking. He shook his head and gave her an exasperated smile. ‘What am I gonna do with you, eh?’
Ashua laid a hand on his shoulder. ‘You’ll look out for me, Doc. And I’ll do the same for you.’
Malvery felt himself well up at that, and blinked back tears. Foolish old man, he thought. Getting sentimental.
‘Doc!’ yelled Silo, as he came hurrying down from the wall to the courtyard. ‘It’s the Cap’n!’
‘He’s alright?’ Ashua asked.
‘He comin’ in on our location! Tell the gunner not to fire on him!’
‘I’m on it,’ said Ashua, and limped off with as much speed as she could manage.
Silo came to a halt next to Malvery, who was still working on the wounded man, assisted by the soldier who’d helped carry him. ‘What about Pinn and Harkins?’ Malvery asked.
‘They good. Pulled out when the anti-aircraft guns kicked up. Been drivin’ me crazy listenin’ to ’em ever since I put the cuff back in. Had some competition goin’ on, how many Sammies they could shoot down.’
‘Who won?’
‘Both of ’em, near as I can tell.’ He spotted the Ketty Jay swooping down through the flak, and waved at some nearby soldier. ‘Clear a space there! Cap’n’s back, damn it! Cap’n’s comin’ back!’
The Ketty Jay’s cargo ramp touched the floor of the courtyard, and the men and women in the hold poured out. Soldiers hugged each other and thumped their comrades’ backs. Grissom and Celerity Blane strode out with their heads held high. Bess larked with the other golems, her childish enthusiasm infecting them.
But then a voice rose over the others. ‘Make way! Make way, there!’ It was Balomon Crund, with Trinica Dracken in his arms. And behind him came Frey, supported by Crake and Kyne, with Samandra Bree at their heels. The crowd parted for them, and they came out into the courtyard, emerging into the grey daylight surrounded by the tinny stink of vented aerium gas.
‘Malvery!’ Crake shouted. ‘Doc!’
Frey could barely see through the agony. His vision had become blurred and his legs had no strength in them. It was hard to tell one pain from another. His torso was an aching mass. He still couldn’t draw breath properly. But he had a purpose, a focus, and that kept him moving.
Malvery got up from the ground, where he’d been tending to casualties, and came hurrying over. The doctor’s moustached face loomed in Frey’s vision.
‘Frey,’ he said in horror. ‘What in buggery happened to you?’
‘Forget about me,’ he said, and gritted his teeth as something shifted and stabbed inside him. ‘Her! Save her!’
Malvery looked at Trinica. ‘Put her on the floor,’ he told Crund, and then he crouched next to her and looked beneath the crude dressing they’d wrapped around her wound. ‘What happened to her?’
‘Cap’n put a cutlass through her,’ said Crake.
‘You what?’ Malvery said. He was feeling her pulse. ‘Second thought, I don’t even wanna know.’ He put the dressing back. ‘Frey, this is too bad. I can’t-’
‘I don’t wanna hear it, Doc. Make it happen.’
‘She needs blood. Now.’
‘Give her mine!’
‘You ain’t got enough to give.’
‘Do what I say, damn it!’ Frey cried, then was seized by a coughing fit and spat blood on the ground.
‘Cap’n!’ Malvery barked, and the volume of his voice shocked Frey into silence. ‘If you ain’t compatible, you’ll kill her. Likely you’ll kill yourself tryin’ anyway. And even if you are compatible, I don’t rate my chances. Let me save you! Or if not you, there’s plenty people round here I can save. I’m a doctor, alright? I know what I’m doing!’
‘Take my blood!’ said Crund.
‘No!’ said Frey. ‘What if you’re not compatible?’
‘What if you’re not?’ Malvery said.
‘I am!’ Frey snarled. ‘We were tested. . After we knew about the baby. . Doctor took my blood for. .’
‘What baby?’ Malvery said, but Frey ignored him. There wasn’t time to argue! Didn’t he see that?
‘We’re compatible,’ he said through gritted teeth. ‘We’ve always been. . compatible.’
‘Frey, I can’t. It’ll kill you. I can’t do that!’
Frey found a burst of strength, fuelled by frustration, and --">
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